I felt happy and nervous when I was on the moon. I felt nervous because I have never been in space before and I felt that I had butterfly in my stomach.
When I landed on the moon I felt like a superhero.
Ata Mārie Yousuf, I hope you are having a groovy day so far!
Thanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I think the poem you’ve made is great - I like how descriptive it is. It meant I could really get an idea of how Neil Armstrong would’ve felt when he first set foot on the moon! If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you?
Next time you make a Summer Learning Journey post, it could be good to write a bit more or add some pictures if you wanted to! This will make your blog more informative and eye-catching, and will bring more people to your blog. Remember there are extra points up for grabs for outstanding posts! :)
Hi Yousuf. I very like your blog post. Hope you do more SLJ so I can read them every weekend. If you want to see my blog here it is. https://wpsizumim.blogspot.com/ Bye.
Hi Yousuf my name is Faris. I like your story keep it up.
ReplyDeleteAta Mārie Yousuf, I hope you are having a groovy day so far!
ReplyDeleteThanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I think the poem you’ve made is great - I like how descriptive it is. It meant I could really get an idea of how Neil Armstrong would’ve felt when he first set foot on the moon! If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you?
Next time you make a Summer Learning Journey post, it could be good to write a bit more or add some pictures if you wanted to! This will make your blog more informative and eye-catching, and will bring more people to your blog. Remember there are extra points up for grabs for outstanding posts! :)
Thanks for posting and have a great day!
Eliza :)
Hi Yousuf.
ReplyDeleteI very like your blog post.
Hope you do more SLJ so I can read them every weekend.
If you want to see my blog here it is.
https://wpsizumim.blogspot.com/
Bye.